This was by far my favorite essay to write. I like to write creatively much more than I do analytically and this assignment lent itself perfectly to that. My creative license came into play and the writing juices really started flowing; i enjoyed this. I also found that this essay was easier for me to write because it was something that happened to me; something concrete and influential that I remember vividly and that had a profound influence on me. It was interesting to put this experience down onto paper, something I had never done before.
The part of this paper that I think I struggled slightly with was the argument part of the narrative argument. My narrative was there and I was very pleased with it, but I found it kind of difficult to intertwine this into an argument. I was having so much fun getting my story down on the paper, that the argument half of the assignment slipped to the back of my brain. In the end however, I felt like I came up with a pretty relevant argument that connected well with my story and fulfilled the argument part of the assignment.
On my final draft I plan to strengthen my argument and give it more clarity. It needs a little more evidence and clarification to make this the paper that I think it could be. Overall I am very pleased and excited to see how my final draft turns out!
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